Hi Bloggers, here is some of my writing.
Leave us alone! This is our home!” the animals all declared as one.The koala was feeling so sad and trying to stop the car Because the car didn’t break. They are home at the bush and the Kangaroo he was not feeling very well because his home was getting chopped down. He want to fly onto the car to stop the car. So he flew up and jumped on the car and it stopped. His home is now safe and he is happy now.
Hi Rahma i love how you started your story it was so unique “Leave us alone! This is our home!” i really liked it the only thing was it was a digger not a car but otherwise fantastic!!! blog ya later Emme.
Kia Ora Rahma, It’s me Parth from room 23.
I really like your writing about save the habitat! I love the first part,
Leave us alone! This is our home!” the animals all declared as one.
I like the punctuation on the first part.
I also like you how made it so discriptive in the writing, Have you done more writing’s like this? I would love to see those if you did.
Blog you, later